Enter the pages of the hand painted world of Journal. A journey through the life of a young and troubled girl as she tries to face up to the choices and responsibilities that come with childhood. An experience that questions the reliability of how we choose to remember events and explores the truths hidden within our dreams.
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Enter the pages of the hand painted world of Journal. A journey through the life of a young and troubled girl as she tries to face up to the choices and responsibilities that come with childhood. An experience that questions the reliability of how we choose to remember events and explores the truths hidden within our dreams.

Journal is a narrative driven adventure game by Richard Perrin, the creator of Kairo and the white chamber, with art and writing by Melissa Royall.

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Mac OS X
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    Mínimo:
    • SO: Windows XP
    • Procesador: 2GHz Dual Core
    • Memoria: 2 GB de RAM
    • Gráficos: Shader Model 3.0
    • Almacenamiento: 250 MB de espacio disponible
    Mínimo:
    • SO: OSX 10.6
    • Procesador: 2GHz Dual Core
    • Memoria: 2 GB de RAM
    • Gráficos: Shader Model 3.0
    • Almacenamiento: 250 MB de espacio disponible
    Mínimo:
    • SO: Ubuntu 10.10
    • Procesador: 2GHz Dual Core
    • Memoria: 2 GB de RAM
    • Gráficos: Shader Model 3.0
    • Almacenamiento: 250 MB de espacio disponible
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NaturalFlirtGamer
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Publicado el 26 de junio
As I started to play Journal, I thought it would be just a quick VN about a typical angsty teenage girl "growing up". Instead I found a story of a girl experiencing multi-faceted emotional distress who, instead of directing her anger inward to be a more sympathetic character, raged against the world and acted out. By the end of her story though, I was in tears. Admittedly, I am kind of a sentimental slob anyway, but her situation hit home to me, I think because of the strength of the writing, dialogue choices, and art that were all beautifully done. The music also enhanced my journey through the game. A journey I'm glad I took.
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Double Uppercut
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Publicado el 13 de junio
I don't know. I really don't know.

It's hard to say whether I enjoyed Journal or not. Like Omikron: The Nomad Soul, there were certainly a lot of things I did like, but just as many things that I just didn't enjoy.

"Journal" is a game that follows a young girl suffering problems after an emotionally traumatic and pivotal moment in her life, and you proceed to play as her for the five days that follow.

For started, I really enjoyed the visual aesthetic... to a certain degree. I love the hand-drawn look (reminds me of "Close Your Eyes", which I played and beat very recently). I like how you actually play in a 3D journal, and as you unlock areas, the items that cover their entrances are removed and set beside the journal. I like the little shadow shows that describe the different carnival members between the days. It feels like I'm going through someone's actual journal and looking at their personal thoughts.

It seemed strange that the world looked all cracked and broke when I was played, but after being revealed the big spoiler and seeing the ending, it actually made a lot more sense that in the girl's imagination, the world would look that way. So good on the designers for making that.

However, I'm not a fan of the characters' art. They all lack faces and proper voices to make them feel real. They just look like puppets. Perhaps another layer to the way the girl perceives the world, but it was one I didn't enjoy. I felt like I could have been immersed more if all the characters had voices.

I also found the portion where you control the girl walking off the pages and across her room a little goofy. It's just weird to see this tiny hand-drawn girl walking across a 3D rendered world. I found something funny in it. And I didn't enjoy how preachy the game got about it's point. I like the little subtleties that support the underlying point, but I also believe that underlying point should be something subtle. Something that you let the player discover for themselves.

Along with that, the music was just... okay. It wasn't memorable. It felt like a person hitting different keys within the five-finger space he had for each location. Even the big, momentous, reveal feels mundane and ordinary because of the music. Along with that, the sound on the girl's voice is terrible. It sounds like she's in a recording room with a mic in front of her. The guy who talked during the carnival shadow shows sounded great, so it seemed odd that her audio quality was so low.

While the world and the character designs did follows the mentality of the girl after this big moment in her life... it doesn't feel like the story relates to it in anyway. It just seems like you walk around and talk to people with little consequence, because the game ends with a text crawl and a montage of a family that had no signigicant important to the writers, it seemed (as their last names are different. But who knows? Maybe Melissa Royall's last name is marital.)

Along with that, the controls just suck. You slide too much to the point that you might leave one area and slide into another one right after without intending to. And there were a host of glitches in the game, from conversations cutting off randomly, to the interact button appearing over things I couldn't interact with, to certain text just being a ton of random letters (Although, I think that was intentional, but I don't know. It was never explained in the story).

I can't say I hate Journal. I just feel apathetic for it, but within my apathy lies just a little bit of sympathy. And maybe you can find some empathy within me for that. I just hope there is no antipathy between me and you, dear reader.

What I mean by that, is that this game has some good stuff that outweighs its flaws, but it just didn't do much for me. However, I know it could be effective for anyone who's gone through a traumatic event in their life and can relate more. I never went through anything similar to the girl, so that might be why my heart doesn't go out ot Journal that well. I can see people loving this game, but for my money I just didn't. I'm giving Journal a 6/10
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Lyrian
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Publicado el 5 de junio
Heartbreaking and beautiful all in one.
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CorvusCorax
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Publicado el 5 de junio
Journal is a narrative-driven adventure game presented in a very unique way - the game itself takes place inside a diary and while it can be found in a 3D room the stages within are presented in 2D, hand-drawn pages. As you go from one "screen" to another a page is turned revealing a new area. If no further progress can be made the game just puts a post-it before you to see that particular area is yet to be revealed.

Basically, each chapter consists of exploring the surrounding area and conversing with the individuals encountered. The basis of the story is your protagonist's problem: suddenly, all the things she'd written down in her journal disappeared. She sets out to find answers but then the game focuses on things such as friendship, love, family issues, problems in school and things that eventually make you reminisce about your life and your childhood. Some of the conversations can feel eerily nostalgic - but then again you have to be in the right mood to play this game.

The game is, unfortunately, quite short, but tells an interesting story with memorable characters and great accompanying music. Again, I would like to emphasize the presentation - this hand-drawn world with its faceless characters can be very intriguing. The only downside for me was that when I was presented with a choice during some key dialogues I did not really feel the result of my selection. These choices can be the polar opposite of one another: you can be nice to your counterpart or can hurt your relationship with that person picking a more harsh response. Still, in the end it didn't matter, at all.

As much as Journal looks like a game for children it is actually for adults. It is very difficult to categorise it - to tell who it is for. I can easily imagine most people will find this uninteresting or quite the opposite - it can evoke emotions that will eventually make you uncomfortable and quit the game.

Nevertheless, I like giving such games a chance and I think you'd better do the same.
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✪Novaz
( 2.3 h registradas )
Publicado el 29 de mayo
10/10 beautiful game, makes u rethink bout life. i dunno why, anyway gr8 game m8
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ElizaJane
( 14.4 h registradas )
Publicado el 29 de mayo
You play this game feeling you must have control because you ARE the main charactor and you get to decide what she decides to say, to a certain extent. You soon see you have little control over her actions, however, and its confusing and a bit frustrating to try and understand why she doesn't seem to listen to you as you play as her. The game is a fairly eye opening symulation that makes sense only at the very end. Its short and simple with a few extra acheivments. On sale, I believe it was totally worth it.
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[DUFF]purzel
( 4.8 h registradas )
Publicado el 27 de mayo
A strong story which keeps you uncertain about the situation the main character is in until the end! I highly recommend this game if you want to be on the edge of you seat until its end!
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Yorkin
( 2.0 h registradas )
Publicado el 23 de mayo
I was in the mood for a quick, single sitting, interactive narrative experience but I couldn't even make it to the end of this short game.

I'll start with what I like about this game. I like the storybook graphic design, music, voice acting and general story delivery.

What I don't like is the story itself or any of the characters. At best, the story is excruciatingly boring. At worst, it's frustrating to witness all the schoolyard drama play out in front of you.

As a big fan of walking simulators or interactive narratives or whatever you choose to call them, I would not recommend this game to anybody.
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AccidentlyOnPurpose
( 14.3 h registradas )
Publicado el 22 de mayo
7/10 - A Heavy Offering of Nostalgia; Blast from the past!

My girlfriend caught me playing this game; It's the same feeling as being caught masturbating. I was embarrassed and a little defensive. If you really wanted to engage in this activity... it should be done in private!

This game hooked me in and kept me interested mainly due to the fact that I felt as though I was reliving my past. If you are at least 20 then you probably at some point utilized AOL instant messenger. This game takes place entirely within the confines of your computer.

The game spans several years through college; you begin talking to a girl from your past and each year the dynamic of the relationship changes. Things get real pretty fast and the path you choose may differ from time to time. Just when you think you have this one figured out... You may be wrong.

Worth $5 or so; it’s better than I thought it would be, but grab on-sale!

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angry quantum physicist
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Publicado el 11 de mayo
This game is very good! You'd think it'd be a game for children, but the story is very ineresting, The quirkiness of this title makes it fun to play.
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Journal is a narrative-driven adventure game presented in a very unique way - the game itself takes place inside a diary and while it can be found in a 3D room the stages within are presented in 2D, hand-drawn pages. As you go from one "screen" to another a page is turned revealing a new area. If no further progress can be made the game just puts a post-it before you to see that particular area is yet to be revealed.

Basically, each chapter consists of exploring the surrounding area and conversing with the individuals encountered. The basis of the story is your protagonist's problem: suddenly, all the things she'd written down in her journal disappeared. She sets out to find answers but then the game focuses on things such as friendship, love, family issues, problems in school and things that eventually make you reminisce about your life and your childhood. Some of the conversations can feel eerily nostalgic - but then again you have to be in the right mood to play this game.

The game is, unfortunately, quite short, but tells an interesting story with memorable characters and great accompanying music. Again, I would like to emphasize the presentation - this hand-drawn world with its faceless characters can be very intriguing. The only downside for me was that when I was presented with a choice during some key dialogues I did not really feel the result of my selection. These choices can be the polar opposite of one another: you can be nice to your counterpart or can hurt your relationship with that person picking a more harsh response. Still, in the end it didn't matter, at all.

As much as Journal looks like a game for children it is actually for adults. It is very difficult to categorise it - to tell who it is for. I can easily imagine most people will find this uninteresting or quite the opposite - it can evoke emotions that will eventually make you uncomfortable and quit the game.

Nevertheless, I like giving such games a chance and I think you'd better do the same.
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I don't know. I really don't know.

It's hard to say whether I enjoyed Journal or not. Like Omikron: The Nomad Soul, there were certainly a lot of things I did like, but just as many things that I just didn't enjoy.

"Journal" is a game that follows a young girl suffering problems after an emotionally traumatic and pivotal moment in her life, and you proceed to play as her for the five days that follow.

For started, I really enjoyed the visual aesthetic... to a certain degree. I love the hand-drawn look (reminds me of "Close Your Eyes", which I played and beat very recently). I like how you actually play in a 3D journal, and as you unlock areas, the items that cover their entrances are removed and set beside the journal. I like the little shadow shows that describe the different carnival members between the days. It feels like I'm going through someone's actual journal and looking at their personal thoughts.

It seemed strange that the world looked all cracked and broke when I was played, but after being revealed the big spoiler and seeing the ending, it actually made a lot more sense that in the girl's imagination, the world would look that way. So good on the designers for making that.

However, I'm not a fan of the characters' art. They all lack faces and proper voices to make them feel real. They just look like puppets. Perhaps another layer to the way the girl perceives the world, but it was one I didn't enjoy. I felt like I could have been immersed more if all the characters had voices.

I also found the portion where you control the girl walking off the pages and across her room a little goofy. It's just weird to see this tiny hand-drawn girl walking across a 3D rendered world. I found something funny in it. And I didn't enjoy how preachy the game got about it's point. I like the little subtleties that support the underlying point, but I also believe that underlying point should be something subtle. Something that you let the player discover for themselves.

Along with that, the music was just... okay. It wasn't memorable. It felt like a person hitting different keys within the five-finger space he had for each location. Even the big, momentous, reveal feels mundane and ordinary because of the music. Along with that, the sound on the girl's voice is terrible. It sounds like she's in a recording room with a mic in front of her. The guy who talked during the carnival shadow shows sounded great, so it seemed odd that her audio quality was so low.

While the world and the character designs did follows the mentality of the girl after this big moment in her life... it doesn't feel like the story relates to it in anyway. It just seems like you walk around and talk to people with little consequence, because the game ends with a text crawl and a montage of a family that had no signigicant important to the writers, it seemed (as their last names are different. But who knows? Maybe Melissa Royall's last name is marital.)

Along with that, the controls just suck. You slide too much to the point that you might leave one area and slide into another one right after without intending to. And there were a host of glitches in the game, from conversations cutting off randomly, to the interact button appearing over things I couldn't interact with, to certain text just being a ton of random letters (Although, I think that was intentional, but I don't know. It was never explained in the story).

I can't say I hate Journal. I just feel apathetic for it, but within my apathy lies just a little bit of sympathy. And maybe you can find some empathy within me for that. I just hope there is no antipathy between me and you, dear reader.

What I mean by that, is that this game has some good stuff that outweighs its flaws, but it just didn't do much for me. However, I know it could be effective for anyone who's gone through a traumatic event in their life and can relate more. I never went through anything similar to the girl, so that might be why my heart doesn't go out ot Journal that well. I can see people loving this game, but for my money I just didn't. I'm giving Journal a 6/10
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Es un juego bastante bonito, en el fondo es triste por el tremendismo que esconde, pero eso no implica que no se disfrute.

Se juega muy fácil, no hay mucho lío de personajes y además la historia es bastante buena (tiene muchos cambios así que la rejugabilidad está asegurada), la banda sonora es muy tranquila y es tan bonito de ver que sólo tienes ganas de seguir y seguir y seguir jugando hasta acabarlo. La duración me parece bastante buena, 2h si tienes un nivel fluido de inglés (está en inglés, pero a estas alturas no debería ser una pega).

Si quieres algo distinto, es totalmente recomendable.
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Es difícil escribir una recomendación de este juego sin desvelar mucho del argumento y echarlo así a perder, pero creo que merece la pena el esfuerzo.

Quizás a simple vista no sea muy atractivo y durante la partida te preguntas muchas veces el porqué es todo tan confuso, pero creo que esa es precisamente la idea. Sentirnos confusos, ver que las cosas son complicadas nos guste o no y, como al final, todas las piezas encajan y tienen sentido muchas de las cosas que al principio no entendíamos...

Creo que es un juego que hay que experimentar, aunque la verdad es que es bastante breve. Una lástima que no tenga tanto reconocimiento como otros juegos que, personalmente, he disfrutado menos.
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Journals are personal things; housing our thoughts, experiences, and deepest secrets as we pour our hearts out into their pages. In a similar way Journal the game is also deeply personal to its developer, Richard Perrin, being kicked around for nearly a decade and only just coming to fruition after passing through numerous different forms and surviving setback after setback. It's a passion project that needed to see the light of day regardless of how long it took to do so, but as any artist should know, after spending so long with your creation it's easy to lose sight of where it's headed and what it has become. For all the time and devotion put into it, Journal is not the masterpiece its creator no doubt envisioned it to be, unfortunately materializing as something far less profound and memorable.

Journal is the story of a girl. A girl having a very hard time attempting to come to terms with the recent upheaval of her life, as well as the general pains of youth attempting to find who she is in the world. It's a melancholy tale that attempts to deal with heavy problems in a realistic, relatable manner, but for all its endeavors to tell a more down-to-earth story than you often see in games, it overplays its hand by throwing its character through far too many hardships without ever elaborating on any of them. It comes off as disingenuous and almost exploitative, like an outsider trying to explain someone else's troubles without anything more than a surface knowledge of what someone experiencing them actually feels like. It's hard to feel empathetic when events unfold like those of a soap opera; without any explanation or justification, only serving to move the narrative onto yet another contrived moment.

The cliches extend to the characters themselves, all of which encompass some form of clique or extreme to better fit into their role of providing the protagonist with a wall to bounce questions off of, with the answer being largely insignificance. One of my biggest issues with the characters and narrative on the whole is how it presents an illusion of choice with no real changes or consequences to speak of. Something you say may affect a handful of lines of dialog (usually not beyond the immediate scene) but the plot itself remains the same, with the most important moments being completely out of the player's control despite the dialog options continually alluding to something more, as if you actually have some control of the outcome.

The worst of these moments are those that retain pertinent information until after you've had to make seemingly important decisions, without being given the facts to do so. For example, early on a friend of your character is accused of breaking a window, an act she denies and you are inclined to agree with, only later finding out that you were the one who accused her in the first place (and as is soon revealed, actually broke the window and were hiding the blame). These revelations come too late though, as you are forced to choose a side prior to being made aware of what actually transpired. It's like walking into a play during the second act; you're expected to already know the characters, their motives, and the the events that have occurred.

By the end of the game I was thoroughly detached from the protagonist, as her actions became more selfish and out of character as the game progressed, and I was helpless to influence any of it or even be clued in as to WHY she was doing what she was. For what is essentially an adventure game with the puzzles and exploration removed, for the dialog and characters to be so uninteresting and half-baked made for an experience that felt hollow.

It might not seem it, but this was a hard review to write. I wanted so badly to be drawn into the beautiful artwork and somber soundtrack which seem so ready to compliment a deeper story than we've become accustomed to, but it all fell flat. Perhaps it's a side-effect of Journal's tumultuous development process, but something went awry and the end result is less than amazing. It's hard for me to pan something that was obviously close to its creator's heart, but when it is flawed at such a fundamental level I can't write it off as something that can be overlooked, but instead have to dismiss it as a whole. Like the journal from the title, it's almost as if large portions of the game simply vanished, leaving you with a shell of what might have once been.

Full disclosure: this game was reviewed using a copy provided by the developer.
You can read more of my writing on Kritiqal.
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I can appreciate games with more focus on storytelling rather than gameplay, but I did not like this game. It's not a bad game, the voice acting is good and sketchy artstyle is really appealing but I could not sympathize with the unnamed protagonist nor did I have any interest in her. She's a troublemaker who lies, cheats, and steals... and breaks windows. Even if you pick the positive moral choices, it doesn't affect the outcome of the story and as a result, she is still a ♥♥♥♥♥.

Throughout the whole game, you're left wondering what it is that she's going through that has caused her to behave this way. I felt like the story was a bit of a muddle and that it wasn't really going anywhere as they leave out details for pretty much everything such as her parent's divorce, her grandmother's sudden change of behaviour, and the package you have to pick up from the post office. They don't really contribute to the story as the ending explains why she has been acting out.

The ending (which I won't spoil) was very cheesy and it was clearly meant to be sentimental but it just happened so abruptly. Nothing in this game has lead to the events of the ending. That has been told through the carnival interludes (that serves as a backstory), in which you end your day by going back to your journal. I feel like I would've sympathize with the character more if they told us this in the first place rather than trying to make it a huge twist.

Is this game trying to tell us a story about the life of a teenage girl or was it meant to be deeper? Either way, the disjointed narrative structure of the game just shoehorns more mysteries and it feels pointless. I bought this game with my disposable income of £1.74 as the game was 75% off. You can complete this game within an hour and a half and the achievements, as well as the game of course, is very easy. They try to tell so much story within the short legth of the game. Unless the game is at that price, I would avoid. It's a love it or hate it game but one with no incentives to play it through the second time.

5/10 - AVERAGE!
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Faulty's scorecard :-

1) Essential purchase
2) Recommended purchase
3) Recommended purchase during a sale
4) Not recommended unless heavily discounted
5) Not even recommended for Steam game collectors

A penny for your thoughts

I am not really sure what to make of indie darling Richard Perrin's (the maker of the wonderful puzzler Kairo) latest game - Journal. It's clear from the ending that it must have been a deeply personal project, but I am still not entirely convinced the adventure game medium was the best way to tell this tale. First things first - Journal is not much a game, but more an interactive choose-your-own adventure kind of experience. How you view this in relation to what you consider constitutes the act of gaming will greatly affect the way you will probably feel about the title. Most are probably going to be dismissive about it and that is perfectly fine since Journal exists in a tightly sealed niché vacuum. I am all for games expanding beyond the traditional shoot-to-kill or might-and-magic tropes that have become gaming's hobbyhorse of late but I am not convinced that Journal is going to be the one to breach those shores.

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The game opens with an unnamed girl whose diary seems to have lost all its pages. Interrogating friends and family on the various topics that crop up or situations the young girl finds herself in will result in her journal once again fleshing itself out. These engagements will also start to give you some context into this young girls life. We soon learn that her parents are separated but we don't learn the truth behind this separation until the final stages of this brief adventure. The games central themes of loss and grief are slowly recorded within the journal but the problem here is that the journal, a central plot-device, is often left on the sidelines as we endure one too many angst-ridden teenage growing pain moment (the Diary of Adrian Mole this most certainly ain't).

Maybe I am just too old and I have forgotten what it must feel like to be a selfish teenager and all the drama that accompanies those evolving years, but I found I cared less and less about stolen snow globes, broken windows or cheating on math tests and even more so when I was trying to do good by helping a pair of school friends fall into love when beneath the surface of this action it did nothing but cut and scar my young protagonist's heart. There is a bigger theme at play here that eventually gives rise to the reasons why the young girl is behaving the way she is and I am not going to reveal it for those still interested in playing Journal. This late game reveal does try to ground the actions that preceded it, but in the end I found it didn't really move me.

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There are some striking things to be found in Journal though. The carnival puppet show that moves each chapter along is engrossing and very well told, eventually tying into the games main story-line and one can't deny it does exude a certain British charm, even if that charm feels as though it has come direct to us from the 1950's. There is a human beating heart at the core of this game - it's just a pity that it's all so surface-level philosophy (ripped straight from psychology 101) than the actual tapping into of one of life's realities - that life can often be a tangled mess when concerned with the likes of human emotion. The game is accompanied by a lovely piano score that while often depressing to listen to suits the tone of the game quite well.

Journal asks that its user be a bit more introspective, but in the end the message it conveys is something one would more likely find written on a milk or cereal carton and that ultimately diminishes its power. Try it - if you dare to be different - but just don't expect your indie world to be spun off its axis.

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"Memory is not particularly linear - it is associative, repetitive, subjective and porous." - Dana Spiotta

This whole little game that Richard Perrin was working on for 10 years is actually about memory, and how definitely subjective it is. Any event, any occurrence that we either live ourselves or solely witness, will be retold through a certain perception. There is no such a thing as the truth once an event is recalled from the memory. There is only our own experience, thus, any narrator is eventually an unreliable narrator. Journal is a perfect example of this notion.

The narrative centers a 5 day period in a nameless teenage girl's life when she's been trying to deal with both expected troubles of growing up, establishing a character, making choices, learning hard earned truths and living consequences; and a specific, singular disaster fundamentally too heavy for her young being to deal with. Through detached and off dialogue options, abhorrently selfish exclamations and numbing expressions, we take a walk. Journal is an interesting, yet eventually surreal and nettlesome experience.

The artwork is hand drawn, picking a thin balance between beautiful and creepy, and that many would basically define as being eerie. A melancholy, water color environment combined with slender, faceless characters do create our setting. The whole display screams detachment and an inability of adaptation with the world. A failure to emphasize is written all over the artwork. The music changes as our heroine change places within a side scrolling environment from "feeling blue" to "something's off" any minute. We are given short stories told with shadow plays between chapters to declare some bitter life lessons now and then, and complete a whole playthrough within 2 hours.

I do adore story driven or narrative games mostly. But defining Journal to be either story driven, or narrative would be an understatement and probably even a completely wrong definition. In this collection of personal expressions, the narrative is completely subjective with little to no room for diverse character progression. Contrary to player expectation with the choice options presented in game, our protagonist already displays a precognized set of actions. Her mentality, her actions and reactions are not actually alterable. Any and all events that we encounter within the game, are already lived, thus categorized and concluded within the mind of our heroine. We are solely there to witness her personal recognition of events rather than having a gameplay. She is a bitter, troubled, detached, numb child; stuck in an existential crisis.

Is this a bad thing for us to witness in a game? Quite possibly not. This game was one of the best examples of "unreliable narrator" in any game I've seen before. Yet, it also comes with the direct obstacle of constantly misinforming the player, making him/her walk into dialogues with semi-truths, wrongly presented information and endless defense mechanisms, evading for any kind of truth to be discovered. Being trapped within the narration, you are doomed to make wrong choices inconsequentially. Thus, there is no immersion, no character sympathy or even empathy, no control over any outcome. You are forced to witness endless apathy directed through stereotyped declarations.

The game is most definitely a great art project, and managed to accomplish what it has come to aspire: an ode to memory, perception and illusion of understanding. Yet, I find myself failing to recommend the game in the end. It is not fun to play. It is impossible for one to actually emphasize with the setting. It all is fleeting, surreal and numbing... as it was probably intended to be so. I most certainly appreciate it, yet fail to recognize the beauty of this kind of existentialist numbness as gameplay. There is no hate, no love, no fear, no bravery... "Nothing" wrapped in pretty colors. Pick it on sale if you'd like to take an unusual experience with the grand illusion of choice.

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A poignant reminder of how subjectively we experience events in our lives. Highly recommended to any adventure/story fans that don't mind empathizing with a teen protagonist with her own individual issues and problems.
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